infinite reality

this is my idea. There was a genetic enhancement that was being used on poor people. It was supposed to enhance all the senses and strength. It was called Zomme ...

Sorry if I'm late, but I want to join Name: Phelix Stark Age: 9 gender: male Appearance. Long, flowing black hair that has never been cut. Pale skin that never ...

OK. It was good. though i couldn't understand why the person was waiting. Especially if it seemed the person would never come back. I liked the style but maybe you ...

I guess it may just not be my type of story, but it seemed just a little bit boring. Maybe liven it up a bit and it will hold the ...

I thought it was good and flowed well until the end. When it said about getting home, I was like what does that have anything to do with the poem? ...

I liked this very much. It was a little too wordy though. I seemed to get lost on what it was saying. Also, i had a hard time figuring out ...

This is one of my best poems. I hope you like it. I won a poetry competition in my school for it. P Lease comment. ( I actually like the ...

This was really original. I didn't understand it all but i guess that's what makes poetry so great. Keep writing

Hey, Its IR, here's what i half to think of your story so far. Ok, this probably wont be the best review, its my third. The first thing i saw ...

Hi, its infinite reality. This poem really was full of strong emotion. this is only my second critique but ill try to give some helpful info. One thing that really ...

HI, it's infinite reality. Ok, the whole prologue was great . Some little things would make it better. 1. Explain what the magi are. Even if the reader knows, its ...

I am thirteen years old. Here's my story. Well, not my life story, the story i wrote. Please comment, i need comments!!! :D :D :D :D :mrgreen: :!: This is ...